# please apply this skill to all the paragraphs in this section beginning from the sentence: \\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\"The t... ## Skills Used - draft-audit ## Retrieval Notes - Session id: `57801fef-b3f5-4892-a09e-6d11c7e8262a` - Last activity: `2026-04-20T16:44:46.009Z` ## My Notes <!-- Add your notes here. This section is preserved across syncs. --> ## Conversation ### User /draft-audit please apply this skill to all the paragraphs in this section beginning from the sentence: "The transposition succeeds only" answer in the chat, not on the document. this is a much harder job than you probably think it is. your number one fuck up in fact. if you can't fund the skill. tell me, don't pretend you've found it ### Assistant I'll work through this carefully. First let me identify the target paragraphs, then run each audit. Target paragraphs (lines 18, 20, 22, 24, 26) plus footnotes `pr` and `br`. ### Step 1: voice-fix Scanning target paragraphs for %%comments%% flagging voice issues. ### Assistant No %%comments%% in the section — skip voice-fix. ### Step 2: source-check Sources referenced in target paragraphs: 1. Davies' performance theory (argument described after block quote already shown at line 12) 2. Danto (red squares / indistinguishable surfaces) 3. Dellsén, Firing, Lawler, Norton (2024) — direct quote "for-whom" vs "by-whom" at p. 679 4. Sokal 1996 *Social Text* affair (footnote `br`) 5. Overgaard, Gilbert, Burwood (2013, ch. 8) — Wittgenstein-as-therapy, Merleau-Ponty "slackens the intentional threads", Dilthey world-view (footnote `pr`) ### User [Request interrupted by user]