# To Do > [!multi-column] > > > [!bug] Overdue > > ```tasks not done (due before today) hide task count hide due date hide edit button short mode > > >[!success] Today > >```tasks not done (due on today) hide task count hide due date hide edit button short mode > # Notes > [!multi-column] > > > [!summary]- Created Today > > ```dataview > > LIST WITHOUT ID file.link > > FROM "" > > WHERE file.cday = this.file.day AND file.name != this.file.name > > SORT file.ctime ASC > > ``` > > > [!example]- Modified Today > > ```dataview > > LIST WITHOUT ID file.link > > FROM "" > > WHERE file.mday = this.file.day AND file.name != this.file.name AND file.cday != this.file.day > > SORT file.mtime ASC > > ``` ## Quick Links ```dataview LIST WITHOUT ID file.link FROM #quicklink SORT file.cday DESC ``` # [[Weight Tracker]] ## [[Scratch Pad]] - #thought the appeal of AI systems that use text a(or speech) as an input are appealing because we already know how to speak, therefore already feel like we have expert knowledge. - relevant to AI Art, aesthetics of design, agentive experience - - #thought about #twinpeaks – lynch apparently finds the inner worlds of things by discecting them. the same could be said for his slowing down music to find new asepcts - Saito #quote #designaesthetics suggests that we can appreciate mundane actions through a combination of defamiliarisation and attentive engagement. She argues that defamiliarisation can reveal "aesthetic richness normally hidden behind the mundane façade of the everyday" (Saito, 2017, p. 15). However, Saito also emphasizes the importance of experiencing the ordinary as ordinary, stating that "paying attention and bringing background to the foreground is simply making something invisible visible and is necessary for any kind of [[aesthetic experience]], whether of the extraordinary or of the ordinary" (p. 23). - https://notebooklm.google.com/notebook/ec30a99d-2ab7-4cb7-9a7b-d0d32e25e197/audio #podcast #llmaudio - https://notebooklm.google.com/notebook/03b37868-c072-4343-bbb6-dcda60327a83/audio #llmaudio - https://notebooklm.google.com/notebook/ba24c41d-0cdb-4175-b485-461c9c0b816d/audio #llmaudio ### Reviews of the butterfly keyboard ## Metadata - Author: [[Phillip Tracy]] - Category: article - URL: https://www.laptopmag.com/features/apple-scissor-vs-butterfly-keyboard-macbook-pro Rami Tabari, staff writer Typing on the 15-inch MacBook Pro's butterfly keyboard was like typing on a desk that was kind of clicky. I started on the 15-inch MacBook Pro with butterfly switches and immediately regretted my decision to take part in this exercise. The keys were so shallow, I felt like I bottomed out as soon as I pressed a key. There wasn't any semblance of feedback, just a dull, uncomfortable thud. My poor fingers felt like the sleep-deprived princess in the Princess and the Pea, just typing on boulders. I really don't understand how people have fooled themselves into thinking this is in any way an acceptable way to live. I can see how someone could get used to the butterfly keys; they have a satisfying, audible click and don't require much force to actuate. But for me, Apple's butterfly keyboard is one of the worst I've had the misfortune to type on. Typing on the 15-inch MacBook Pro's butterfly keyboard was like typing on a desk that was kind of clicky The paper presents a compelling argument for incorporating user experience into [[the aesthetics of design]], moving beyond traditional perception-based accounts. To enhance its cohesiveness and clarity, here are some suggestions: ### Chatgpt's advice on finising touches to the paper. 2. **Clarify [[the Structure]] and Flow:** - **Introduction:** - **Thesis Statement:** Strengthen the thesis by clearly stating your central argument early in the introduction. This will provide a solid foundation for the reader to understand the subsequent discussions. - **Transitions Between Sections:** - **Section Endings and Beginnings:** Ensure that each section concludes with a summary of [[key points]] and introduces how the [[next section]] will expand or contrast these ideas. This will help the reader follow the progression of your argument. 3. **Enhance Clarity of Arguments:** - **Define [[Key Terms]] Early:** Terms like "[[agentive phenomenology]]," "[[chromatic illumination]]," and "hylomorphic account" are introduced later in the paper. Providing definitions or brief explanations earlier will help readers unfamiliar with these concepts. - **Consistent Use of Terminology:** Ensure that [[key concepts]] are used consistently throughout the paper. For example, if you introduce "[[aesthetic effortlessness]]," maintain that terminology rather than switching between similar phrases. 4. **Review Section 4 for Integration:** - **"[[New Version]]" Heading:** The heading "[[New Version]]" in Section 4 might confuse readers. Consider removing it or clarifying that this section has been revised. - **Integrate Section 4 Smoothly:** Ensure that the concepts introduced in Section 4 connect logically with the previous sections. Explicitly reference earlier discussions to show how this section builds on or refines previous ideas. 5. **Improve Paragraph Structure:** - **Break Up Long Paragraphs:** Some paragraphs are quite dense, which can make them challenging to read. Breaking them into shorter paragraphs can enhance readability and allow each idea to stand out. - **Topic Sentences:** Start each paragraph with a clear topic sentence that encapsulates the main idea. This helps guide the reader through your argument. 6. **Strengthen Connections Between Ideas:** - **Use Linking Phrases:** Phrases like "however," "therefore," and "for example" can help illustrate how each point relates to the next. - **Explicit References to Previous Points:** When introducing new ideas, reference earlier arguments to reinforce how they are connected. 7. **Conclude Each Section with Key Takeaways:** - Summarizing the main points at the end of each section can reinforce your arguments and remind the reader of how each part contributes to the overall thesis. 8. **Enhance the Conclusion:** - **Summarize Contributions:** Clearly restate how your paper has advanced the discussion on design aesthetics. - **Emphasize the Implications:** Highlight the broader significance of incorporating user experience into design aesthetics, possibly suggesting areas for future research or application. 9. **Address Minor Consistencies:** - **First-Person Usage:** The paper occasionally switches between "we" and "I." Decide on a consistent narrative voice. - **Reference Integration:** While you mentioned not focusing on references, ensure that when you discuss authors like Nguyen, Montero, and Horgan, their contributions are clearly connected to your arguments. 10. **Example Clarifications:** - **Apple's Butterfly Keyboard:** When discussing this example, ensure that it's clear how it supports your argument about the limitations of perception-based aesthetics. - **Viola Player Example:** This is a strong illustration of appreciating use. Make sure the transition into this example is smooth, and clarify how it ties back to your main thesis. 11. **Ensure Consistency in Section Numbering and Titles:** - Double-check that section numbers and titles align correctly and consistently reflect the content of each section. By focusing on these areas, you can enhance the cohesiveness of your paper, making your arguments clearer and more compelling to the reader. Small adjustments in structure and clarity can significantly impact the overall effectiveness of your work, preparing it well for journal submission.