Speaker's notes for [[WIP Presentation - AI Persuasion and Propaganda]]. WIP seminar presentation 2026-01-20.
**Related:** [[McKenna Propaganda Paper Plan]], [[McKenna Propaganda Paper - Planning Scraps]], [[2026-01-19 - McKenna Paper Critique Development]]
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# Complete Speaker's Notes
## SLIDE 1: Title Slide
**AI PERSUASION AND PROPAGANDA: A Critique of McKenna**
Nick Young, WIP Seminar, 2026-01-20
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Opening approach:**
- This is work in progress on [[Robin McKenna]]'s recent paper "Sophistry on Steroids"
- Paper argues we should worry about AI persuasion even in a "best case" where it's not deceptive
- My claim: his distinction between troubling AI persuasion and propaganda collapses
- But also skeptical whether his specific scenario can actually occur
**Frame the contribution:**
- Philosophical analysis applying the [[Epistemic Defectiveness Model]] to McKenna's case
- Two-part structure: first show the collapse, then question the empirical assumptions
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## SLIDE 2: McKenna's Central Question
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**McKenna's framing:**
- His question: should we worry about persuasive AI?
- Answer: yes, but for specific reasons
- Not about superhuman persuasion (AI being better than humans at persuading)
- About scale + concentration of power
- "Marketplace of arguments" - the argumentative environment where public deliberation happens
**Key quote breakdown:**
- "Small number of powerful actors" - this is about concentrated capacity
- "Dominating the marketplace of arguments" - controlling what arguments are available and salient
- This provides materials for discussing "important moral, political and societal issues"
**Why this matters:**
- McKenna is trying to identify a worry that's STRUCTURAL not CONTENT-based
- Not about lies or manipulation, but about who controls argumentative space
- This sets up his "best case" move - bracketing the obvious problems to isolate something deeper
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## SLIDE 3: Not About Superhuman Persuasion
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The key distinction McKenna makes:**
- NOT worried because AI will be better persuaders than humans
- Worried because AI persuasion is (a) easy to deploy at scale + (b) requires resources to create in the first place
- This creates asymmetry: few actors with resources can flood the marketplace
**Why he emphasizes this:**
- Avoids getting stuck on questions about AI capabilities
- Don't need AGI or superhuman reasoning to have the problem
- Current LLMs are sufficient if they can generate plausible arguments at scale
- The problem is QUANTITY + CONCENTRATION, not QUALITY
**Implications:**
- This means the worry survives even if AI arguments are mediocre
- Even if humans are better persuaders one-on-one, scale changes the game
- Links to his "sophistry on steroids" metaphor - it's about armies of arguers, not superior arguers
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## SLIDE 4: Sophistry on Steroids
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The sophistry metaphor:**
- Ancient sophists: arguers for hire, would argue any side for payment
- Traditional worry: undermines truth-seeking, treats argument as mere tool
- AI sophistry: can generate ARMIES of arguers for hire instantly
- "Huge numbers" + "within minutes" + "massive increase in quantity"
**Key phrase: "any dilution in quality made up for by massive increase in quantity":**
- Acknowledges AI arguments might be lower quality than expert human arguments
- But quantity compensates - flood the zone
- This is the core of his "not about superhuman persuasion" point
**Connection to marketplace:**
- If you can generate unlimited arguments for your position
- Even if each is mediocre, the cumulative effect dominates the marketplace
- Counterarguments get drowned out by sheer volume
**Note for discussion:**
- This assumes volume matters for persuasion effectiveness
- We'll return to skepticism about this later (finite schemas)
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## SLIDE 5: McKenna's "Best Case" - Description
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**What McKenna brackets (sets aside):**
- Misinformation and deception - obviously problematic, not interesting
- Manipulative tactics - emotional manipulation, dark patterns, etc.
- Coercive influence - threats, forcing people
**What remains in the "best case":**
- Reason-giving arguments - actual arguments with premises and conclusions
- Aimed at [[rational persuasion]] - trying to get people to believe through reasoning
- But deployed at scale by concentrated actors - this is the structural worry
**Why this move matters:**
- McKenna wants to isolate a worry that persists even when we idealize away the obvious problems
- If there's still a problem in the "best case," that's philosophically interesting
- Shows the issue isn't just "AI will be used to lie" (everyone knows that)
- The issue is something about the structure of argumentation and public deliberation
**Critical point:**
- McKenna thinks this "best case" is NOT propaganda
- He treats propaganda as necessarily involving manipulation or coercion
- My paper challenges this - argues the "best case" (if troubling) IS propaganda
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## SLIDE 6: McKenna's "Best Case" - His Words
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Key phrase: "genuine arguments, evidence, and reasons":**
- Not fabricated, not lies, not misleading individual claims
- Actual arguments that have logical structure
- Evidence that supports the conclusions
- Reasons that genuinely count in favor of the position
**"Conclusions that the purveyors themselves endorse":**
- Not arguing for positions they don't believe
- Sincere in that they actually hold these views (or want them adopted)
- This rules out pure cynicism - arguing for X while believing not-X
**"Genuine arguments with the attempt to rationally persuade, not simply deceive or mislead":**
- Trying to get people to believe through recognizing reasons
- Not trying to trick them or manipulate them
- This is meant to be the cleanest case - persuasion as it "should" work
**McKenna's assumption:**
- This best case is troubling (because of scale/concentration)
- But NOT propaganda (because it's "genuine" rational persuasion)
- My task: show this distinction doesn't hold
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## SLIDE 7: What is Rational Persuasion?
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Why this matters:**
- This is McKenna's working definition of rational persuasion for his "best case"
- It's deliberately THIN - only requires giving reasons that support your conclusion
- Does NOT require: presenting counterarguments, representing the full reason-space, acknowledging competing considerations
- This thinness opens the door to the omission-based route to propaganda
**The critical move:**
- [[Thomas Mitchell|Mitchell]] & [[Thomas Douglas|Douglas]] define rational persuasion as providing reasons that the target recognizes and acts on
- But "providing reasons" ≠ "providing a fair representation of the reason-space"
- You can rationally persuade (on this definition) while systematically omitting decisive counterarguments
- This makes the thin conception compatible with epistemic defectiveness
**Connect to Epistemic Defectiveness Model:**
- [[Bonard, Contesi and Marques|Bonard et al.]]'s cherry-picking example: reporting only victories, not defeats
- Satisfies Grice's Quality maxim (it's TRUE) but violates Quantity (omits relevant info)
- Giving genuine reasons can still be misleading if you systematically omit reasons against it
- The thin conception permits exactly this selective reason-giving
**Anticipated questions:**
- "But isn't ALL persuasion selective?" → Yes, but SYSTEMATIC selectivity at SCALE crosses into propaganda
- "Doesn't this make ordinary persuasion too demanding?" → Individual vs. campaign-level persuasion
- "Can you intend to rationally persuade while being epistemically defective?" → Yes, if you believe your position is correct; defectiveness comes from systemic omission, not bad faith
**Transition:**
This thin conception is what McKenna uses to bracket propaganda. But I argue this distinction is unstable - the features that make AI persuasion troubling are what make it epistemically defective.
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## SLIDE 8: McKenna's Assumption
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**McKenna's position:**
- ✓ Politically troubling - marketplace domination is a real problem
- ✗ NOT propaganda - because it involves "genuine" rational persuasion, not manipulation
**Why he thinks this:**
- He treats propaganda as "overtly coercive or manipulative" (his words from p. 1)
- His best case brackets manipulation and coercion
- Therefore (he thinks) it's outside propaganda territory
**The question my paper asks:**
- Does this distinction actually hold?
- Can something be politically troubling in McKenna's sense WITHOUT being propaganda?
- Or do the features that make it troubling also make it propaganda?
**Preview of my argument:**
- I'll argue the distinction collapses
- Using the Epistemic Defectiveness Model, the troubling features ARE what constitute propaganda
- Marketplace domination through scale IS a form of epistemic defectiveness
**Transition:**
To show this, I need to introduce a more sophisticated account of propaganda than McKenna's "coercive or manipulative" baseline. Enter the Epistemic Defectiveness Model.
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## SLIDE 9: But What IS Propaganda?
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The negative connotation:**
- In contemporary English, "propaganda" is pejorative
- Associated with "systematic dissemination... in a biased or misleading way"
- Not neutral term for persuasive communication
**Paradigm cases:**
- Nazi propaganda - Third Reich's systematic communication campaigns
- Rwanda RTML radio - hate radio inciting genocide
- Tobacco industry campaigns - systematic deception about health effects
**What these share:**
- Not just individual lies or misleading claims
- Systematic, coordinated campaigns
- Epistemically problematic (biased, misleading, omitting crucial info)
- Political/institutional provenance
- Aimed at shaping beliefs and attitudes of groups
**Why this matters:**
- These paradigm cases involve MORE than just coercion or manipulation
- They involve epistemic defectiveness - something wrong with how information is presented
- [[Constant Bonard|Bonard]], [[Filippo Contesi|Contesi]], & [[Teresa Marques]] develop this into a systematic account
**Note:**
- There are other accounts of propaganda (expressive, rhetorical, etc.)
- I'm focusing on the epistemic account because it's well-developed and fits the case
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## SLIDE 10: Epistemic Defectiveness Model - Description
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The four conditions (all necessary):**
**1. [[Epistemic defectiveness]]:**
- Message is defective in some broad sense
- Not just false - includes misleading, omitting, generating false inferences
- This is the CORE condition - what makes propaganda epistemically problematic
**2. Political intent:**
- Institutional provenance - produced by/for organizations, causes, institutions
- Persuasion for political ends - trying to shape political beliefs/attitudes/actions
- Not just any persuasion, but politically-oriented persuasion
**3. Social targeting:**
- Targets socially significant groups - not just individuals
- About shaping group beliefs, public opinion, collective attitudes
- This is what makes it politically consequential
**4. Awareness:**
- Agent aware or should be aware of the defectiveness
- Responsibility condition - can't be propaganda if you genuinely don't realize it's defective
- But includes "should be aware" - negligence counts
**Why this model:**
- Refines earlier work by [[Sheryl Tuttle Ross]]
- Widely cited in recent propaganda literature
- Captures paradigm cases while being philosophically precise
**Key point:**
- Condition 1 (epistemic defectiveness) is doing the heavy lifting
- This is what I'll argue McKenna's scenario satisfies
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## SLIDE 11: Epistemic Defectiveness Model - Their Words
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Breaking down the conditions in their own words:**
**Condition 1 - "epistemically defective message":**
- "false, inappropriate, or connected to other beliefs in ways that are inapt, misleading, or unwarranted"
- Very broad notion of defectiveness
- Includes: falsehood, inappropriateness, misleading connections, unwarranted inferences
- Tied to "illocutionary and perlocutionary intents" - what you're trying to do communicatively
**Condition 2 - "produced by, or on behalf of, a social or political institution":**
- Not just individual speakers
- Organizational/institutional context
- "Intention to persuade, for direct political ends"
- This rules out art, entertainment, education (even if they have political effects)
**Condition 3 - "socially significant group":**
- Not targeting individuals
- About groups - publics, demographics, constituencies
- What makes propaganda politically consequential
**Condition 4 - "aware of the epistemic defectiveness or should have been aware":**
- Knowledge or negligence
- Producer knows or should know the message is defective
- Responsibility condition
**Read the quote slowly:**
- Let it sink in how broad "epistemic defectiveness" is
- It's not just lying - it's anything that makes the epistemic character of the message problematic
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## SLIDE 12: Epistemic Defectiveness ≠ Falsehood
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The cherry-picking example:**
- Report true information about winning one battle
- Omit true information about losing another battle
- Everything you SAY is true - no Gricean Quality violation (truth)
- But you violate Gricean Quantity (relevant information)
**Why this is misleading:**
- Audience pragmatically infers: "this is all the relevant information about the war"
- That inference is FALSE - there's highly relevant information being omitted
- So the communication is epistemically defective even though it contains only truths
**Gricean framework:**
- Quality maxim: be truthful
- Quantity maxim: provide the right amount of information (not too little, not too much)
- Propaganda can satisfy Quality while violating Quantity
**Key insight:**
- Epistemic defectiveness comes from OMISSION, IMPLICATURE, CONNECTIONS
- Not just from saying false things
- This dramatically widens what counts as epistemically defective
**Why this matters for McKenna:**
- His "best case" involves "genuine arguments, evidence, and reasons" (all true)
- But if they're systematically selective, omitting counterarguments, they can still be defective
- Defectiveness through omission is exactly what his scenario involves
**Transition:**
This broader notion of epistemic defectiveness is what lets me argue that McKenna's best case IS propaganda. Let me show you the dilemma.
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## SLIDE 13: The Dilemma for McKenna
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The dilemma structure:**
- McKenna wants a middle category: troubling but not propaganda
- I argue there's no stable middle ground
- He has to choose between two horns
**Horn 1 - Fully idealized "best case":**
- Imagine AI that's completely transparent about its provenance
- Presents arguments symmetrically across positions
- Explicitly flags limitations and uncertainties
- Ensures robust exposure to counterarguments
- Result: NO epistemic defectiveness (it's giving you the full picture)
- Therefore: NOT propaganda ✓
- BUT ALSO: Not troubling! ✗
**Why Horn 1 isn't troubling:**
- If the system ensures you see counterarguments, it's not dominating the marketplace
- If it's transparent and symmetric, it's not creating misleading implicatures
- The worry evaporates along with the propaganda classification
- This is like having an AI debate moderator, not an AI persuader
**Horn 2 - Marketplace domination:**
- Small number of actors flood argumentative environment
- Arguments favor their interests/positions
- This IS troubling in McKenna's sense (scale + concentration)
- But: is it epistemically defective?
**The question for Horn 2:**
- If flooding creates omission-by-crowding-out → epistemically defective
- If saturation creates false inferences → epistemically defective
- If controlling salience distorts what seems decisive → epistemically defective
- Then it satisfies the EDM → it IS propaganda
**The dilemma:**
- Either idealize away the troubling features (Horn 1) → not propaganda but not troubling
- Or preserve the troubling features (Horn 2) → epistemically defective → propaganda
- No stable middle ground
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## SLIDE 14: Campaign-Level Defectiveness
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The core conceptual innovation:**
- Standard approach: evaluate propaganda at the level of individual utterances
- My move: evaluate at the level of the CAMPAIGN or COMMUNICATIVE ECOSYSTEM
- This matters because McKenna's worry is systemic effects - marketplace domination, not individual bad arguments
- The Epistemic Defectiveness Model can accommodate this if we treat "the communicative act" broadly
**Route 1: Omission-by-crowding-out:**
- Not just failing to mention counterarguments in your speech
- Making counterarguments practically inaccessible in the information environment
- Flood the argumentative space with pro-X arguments, anti-X arguments get crowded out
- Audiences encounter them less, harder to find, get less attention
- Result: audience's epistemic position is defective even if each individual argument is sound
- Violates Grice's Quantity maxim at the ecosystem level
**Route 2: Quantity-style misleadingness:**
- Saturation creates false pragmatic inferences
- "I keep seeing arguments for X, barely any for Y" → "X must be the stronger position"
- "These arguments are everywhere" → "This must be what the evidence supports"
- These inferences are FALSE if saturation is artificial (concentrated deployment, not argumentative strength)
- Audience misled not by what's said, but by what the PATTERN implicates
**Route 3: Distorted salience:**
- What gets attention signals what's important or decisive
- Pro-X arguments dominate attention through volume, appear more important/decisive than they are
- Form of epistemic manipulation even if arguments themselves are sound
- How propaganda works: not just lying, but controlling what people think about and how much weight it gets
**Critical distinction:**
- Individual argument soundness vs. systemic epistemic health
- Collection of individually sound arguments can collectively constitute propaganda
- This dissolves McKenna's troubling-but-not-propaganda category
**Why this matters for the dilemma:**
- McKenna: marketplace domination is troubling but not propaganda (arguments are "genuine")
- But if marketplace domination WORKS through these three mechanisms, it IS epistemically defective
- Epistemically defective + political intent + targets groups + awareness → propaganda (on EDM)
- Troubling version of his scenario collapses into propaganda
**Anticipated questions:**
- "Too demanding? Does every persuader need to ensure counterarguments are accessible?" → Difference between individual persuaders and concentrated actors flooding the marketplace
- "Can we evaluate propaganda at campaign level?" → Yes - propaganda scholarship often talks about campaigns, not just individual messages
- "How do we individuate 'campaigns'?" → Fair question, but conceptual point stands: systematic coordinated communication can be defective even when individual pieces aren't
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## SLIDE 15: The Collapse
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Summarizing the argument:**
- McKenna wants: troubling AI persuasion that's NOT propaganda
- Middle category: problematic but not epistemically defective
- I've argued: this category is UNSTABLE
**The instability:**
- EITHER: Idealize to remove defectiveness → becomes benign (not troubling)
- OR: Preserve troubling features → becomes defective → propaganda
- No stable middle ground
**The key insight:**
- "The mechanism that makes it troubling IS the mechanism of epistemic defectiveness"
- It's not two separate things (structural problem + epistemic problem)
- It's ONE problem viewed from two angles
- Marketplace domination WORKS BY creating epistemic defectiveness
**What this means:**
- McKenna has not identified a new category of AI risk
- He's identified a potential form of propaganda
- The "best case" rhetoric is misleading - if it's genuinely best case, it's not troubling
- If it's troubling, it's propaganda
**Implications for AI ethics:**
- Can't bracket propaganda concerns by focusing on "genuine arguments"
- Scale + concentration + selective reason-giving = propaganda
- Need to think about AI persuasion using propaganda frameworks
**Transition:**
But now the skeptical turn. I've argued that IF McKenna's scenario happens, it's propaganda. But CAN it actually happen? Can the marketplace of arguments be dominated in this way?
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## SLIDE 16: But Wait: Can It Actually Happen?
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**The skeptical turn:**
- Grant everything I've argued so far (troubling = propaganda)
- Now question the antecedent: can marketplace actually be dominated?
- This is an empirical question, not just conceptual
**Finite argument schemas:**
- Reference: [[Douglas Walton|Walton]], Reed, & Macagno (2008) - major work on argumentation schemes
- Argument schemes = patterns of reasoning (appeal to authority, slippery slope, appeal to consequences, etc.)
- For any political question, there are FINITE recognizable argument types
- Immigration: appeals to rights, consequences, fairness, cultural preservation, economic impacts, etc.
- Climate: appeals to precaution, economic costs, intergenerational justice, scientific authority, etc.
- Redistribution: appeals to desert, need, equality, incentives, property rights, etc.
**Variations but underlying structure:**
- Rhetorical framing varies infinitely
- Emotional coloring varies
- Specific examples vary
- BUT underlying argumentative structure is FINITE
**Implication for McKenna's scenario:**
- If I flood you with 10,000 "appeal to consequences" arguments for immigration restriction
- You're not encountering 10,000 different arguments
- You're encountering the SAME argument 10,000 times with different packaging
- Diminishing returns - after you've seen the schema a few times, more instances don't add persuasive force
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## SLIDE 17: The Empirical Question
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Don't want to overstate this:**
- This is a tentative empirical claim, not a confident prediction
- The questions are OPEN - need actual research
**Two possibilities:**
**Possibility 1: Argument schemas constrain flooding:**
- If argumentation is schema-based and schemas are finite
- Then flooding produces diminishing returns
- People recognize "I've seen this argument before in different words"
- Implicature "these must be the main considerations" breaks down
- Marketplace domination fails at the argumentative level
**Possibility 2: Rhetorical/emotional framing matters more:**
- Even if argument schemas are finite, rhetorical framing may not be
- Emotional resonance, narrative framing, affective loading vary infinitely
- Flooding might succeed at the level of ATTENTION and AFFECT
- Even if it fails at the level of argumentative content
- "I'm tired of hearing about this" vs. "I'm convinced by this"
**The crucial question:**
- Does AI influence work at the level of ARGUMENT or AFFECT?
- If argument: finite schemas might constrain it
- If affect: flooding could work despite finite schemas
**What this means for the paper:**
- McKenna has identified a POSSIBLE area of concern
- But unclear whether his SPECIFIC SCENARIO (marketplace domination via argument flooding) is the right place to locate it
- Real AI influence risks might lie elsewhere
**Honest uncertainty:**
- I don't know the answer to this empirical question
- That's okay - the philosophical work is showing the conceptual structure
- But we need to be clear about what's conceptual vs. what's empirical
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## SLIDE 18: Upshot
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Main claim - the collapse:**
- McKenna's distinction between troubling AI persuasion and propaganda COLLAPSES
- Under the Epistemic Defectiveness Model, the troubling features ARE propaganda features
- No stable middle ground
**The conceptual contribution:**
- Campaign-level epistemic defectiveness as a way to evaluate systematic persuasion
- Three routes: omission-by-crowding-out, quantity-style misleadingness, distorted salience
- Shows how individually sound arguments can be collectively defective
**But - empirical uncertainty:**
- Unclear whether McKenna's SPECIFIC SCENARIO (marketplace domination via volume) is achievable
- Finite argument schemas might constrain the effectiveness of flooding
- Rhetorical/emotional framing might matter more than argumentative content
**Task ahead:**
- If real AI influence risks lie elsewhere than argument flooding, need to identify where
- Possibilities: attention manipulation, affective influence, parasocial relationships, narrative control
- The conceptual framework (EDM, campaign-level evaluation) applies to these too
**What the paper does:**
- Clarifies the conceptual landscape
- Shows McKenna hasn't identified a new category of AI risk distinct from propaganda
- Opens empirical questions about where real risks lie
- Provides framework (EDM) for evaluating AI influence campaigns
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## SLIDE 19: Questions for Discussion
### SPEAKER'S NOTES
**Question 1: Campaign-level defectiveness as unit of analysis:**
- Is this the right way to think about propaganda?
- Or does it demand too much of individual persuaders?
- Should we hold concentrated actors to different standards than individuals?
**Question 2: How finite are argument schemas?**
- Is Walton et al.'s framework right?
- Does flooding fail argumentatively but succeed affectively?
- What's the relationship between argument and affect in persuasion?
**Question 3: Is EDM too broad?**
- Does omission-based defectiveness demand too much?
- Should persuaders be responsible for ensuring counterarguments are accessible?
- Difference between individual responsibility and systemic effects?
**Question 4: Where DO the real risks lie?**
- If not argument flooding, then what?
- Attention manipulation? Affective influence? Parasocial relationships?
- How should we study AI influence empirically?
**Be ready for:**
- Pushback on campaign-level evaluation (too demanding?)
- Questions about other accounts of propaganda (expressive, rhetorical)
- Skepticism about whether EDM captures all propaganda
- Interest in the empirical questions (that's good - shows the conceptual work opened real questions)