# Content - Very good generally. a clear idea - could have stayed slightly more on target (focussed more on a the negative argument implied by [[the question]]), but the positive view was well grounded - Good that it was, as far as I can tell an original view - good final line. ## Structure - good intro and conclusion - Structure is reasonably good but kind of goes round in circles sometimes. maybe a better one would be... - 1 designers view - 2 social acceptance - 3. your view ## Grade? 24/25 for the writing 24/25 for the speaking